Cho em hỏi bài này có sai chỗ nào không ạ, em viết về đề bài mang theo gì để làm gì. Bài làm đầy ạ:
Hello teacher and every one
My name is Huy . Today I would like to talk about:
Things I need for atrip ?
This summer i going to go camping with my friends at a campsite.I think we need to bring a tent ,số we have some where to sleep. We also bring bottle water ,so we don't get thirsty. We need to bring food , số we don't get hungry .We need to bring comic...
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Cho em hỏi bài này có sai chỗ nào không ạ, em viết về đề bài mang theo gì để làm gì. Bài làm đầy ạ: Hello teacher and every one My name is Huy . Today I would like to talk about: Things I need for atrip ? This summer i going to go camping with my friends at a campsite.I think we need to bring a tent ,số we have some where to sleep. We also bring bottle water ,so we don't get thirsty. We need to bring food , số we don't get hungry .We need to bring comic books , so we have something to read I think those are things we need to bring for a trip . Thanks for your listening Dạ áo thấy sao chỗ nào thì chỉ ra và sửa giúp em với ạ vì đây là bài nói thì cuối kì của em nên mong mọi người giúp đỡ. Em xin cảm ơn
Things I need -> Things we need
every one -> everyone
atrip -> a trip
going -> am going
số -> so
have -> will have
some where -> somewhere
bottle -> bottled
don't get thirsty-> won't get thirsty
số -> so
don't get hungry -> won't get hungry
need to -> should
we have something -> we will have something
I think those are things we need -> Those are things that we need
Phần cuối cũng có thể nói câu gì đó cho nó màu mè hơn chút như là:
My presentation ends here. Thank you so much for listening to me!
Hai câu này mình hay áp dụng để kết thúc bài thuyết trình trong những bài nói trên lớp.
Hello teacher and everyone. My name is Huy . Today I would like to talk about: Things we need for a trip ? This summer I am going to go camping with my friends at a campsite. I think we need to bring a tent ,so we will have somewhere to sleep. We also bring bottled water ,so we won't get thirsty. We need to bring food , so we won't get hungry .We should bring comic books , so we will have something to read Those are things that we need to bring for a trip. My presentation ends here .Thanks for your listening
-Ở chỗ should: need to là cần thiết, nhưng mà cái đọc truyện này cũng không cần thiết lắm, nó chỉ là thú vui giải trí thôi chứ chẳng cần mang theo cũng được.
-Chỗ "need to bring for a trip" là để nguyên nha, mình chỉ thay chỗ "I think those are things we need" là chuyển thành "Those are things that we need" thôi
*Những chỗ mình in đậm trong bài là mình sửa rồi nha