Question

[Nguyễn Bảo Long]

Ngữ pháp của mình có chỗ nào sai không?

Today, I will talk about the similarities and the differences between Landmark 72 and Lotte tower. Lotte tower is shorter than Landmark 72 ( Lotte tower only has 65 floor but Landmark has 72 floor) I special like Lotte because it didn’t has only flat . It also has cinema, hotel, shopping centre too. I still think that Lotte is better than Landmark because the Lotte Tower also has a modern architecture that make me very surprising when i go to explore in Hanoi .But landmark is also interesting. I didn’t go to landmark anytime before but i think Landmark is the vietnam’s second interesting skyscraper. In the highest floor of Landmark ( floor 81) we can see the most beautiful landscape of entire capital city of Vietnam ( Hanoi).  I think I like Lotte a little bit more than Landmark but both of them still the best skyscrapers I ever know.

Thank you !

Nguyen Bao Long (09/09/2023)

Answer 1

[Nguyễn Đăng Nhân]

Today, I will talk about the similarities and the differences between Landmark 72 and Lotte tower. Lotte tower is shorter than Landmark 72 ( Lotte tower only has 65 floor but Landmark has 72 floor) I special like Lotte because it didn’t has only flat. It also has cinema, hotel, shopping centre too. I still think that Lotte is better than Landmark because the Lotte Tower also has a modern architecture that make me very surprising when i go to explore in Hanoi .But landmark is also interesting. I didn’t go to landmark anytime before but i think Landmark is the vietnam’s second interesting skyscraper. In the highest floor of Landmark ( floor 81) we can see the most beautiful landscape of entire capital city of Vietnam ( Hanoi).

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Today, I will talk about the similarities and differences between Landmark 72 and Lotte Tower. Lotte Tower is shorter than Landmark 72 ( Lotte Tower only has 65 floors but Landmark has 72 floors) I special like Lotte because it doesn’t have only flats. It also has a cinema, hotel, and shopping center. I still think that Lotte is better than Landmark because the Lotte Tower also has a modern architecture that makes me very surprised when I go to explore in Hanoi . But the landmark is also interesting. I didn’t go to Landmark anytime before but I think Landmark is Vietnam’s second most interesting skyscraper. On the highest floor of Landmark ( floor 81), we can see the most beautiful landscape of the entire capital city of Vietnam ( Hanoi).